The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #74337   Message #1297278
Posted By: Little Hawk
14-Oct-04 - 07:09 PM
Thread Name: BS: World's Worst Poetry
Subject: RE: BS: World's Worst Poetry
Hmm. Amos, I think that is on the verge of being a darned good song lyric if one slightly changes just a few of the words. I'm serious. I'd like to rewrite it and sing it, maybe. I like it.