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Thread #76485 Message #1358661
Posted By: CapriUni
16-Dec-04 - 09:56 AM
Thread Name: CapriUni's new Yule song: a little help?
Subject: RE: CapriUni's new Yule song: a little help?
Thank you, MMario.... I value your opinion. Of course, as a writer, it's very hard for me to stop tinkering... :-)
Though I must say I am pleased with it. I'm starting to visualize this song as a picture book, with an illustration for each line (or at least, couplet).
Grown-ups these days can be squeemish when it comes to frightening children. But I doubt the kids themselves are -- just look at the popularity of the Goosebumps or Unfortunate Events books.
And if you are a good child, perhaps the best gift of all is to get that bully out of your life.... or at least, to fantasize about it.