The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #76942 Message #1381664
Posted By: CapriUni
18-Jan-05 - 04:56 PM
Thread Name: Lyr/Tune Add: Simple, Little Things (Ann Magill)
Subject: RE: Lyr/Tune Add: New Year (& Yule) song by CapriUni
I know it's not the New Year anymore, but I was just wondering:
I start the third verse with "So when ..." as if the idea that "it is just as important to receive as to give" were obvious. But is it?
If not, I'd like to put another verse in there, to build upon that idea. But I don't want to overstuff the song if I don't have to...