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Thread #77963 Message #1404501
Posted By: GUEST,Joe_F
10-Feb-05 - 09:42 AM
Thread Name: Not-So-Good Lines in Songs
Subject: RE: Not-So-Good Lines in Songs
Mention of Bob Dylan in another thread reminded me of the following spectacles of nonpoetry:
And some of us will grow up to be lawyers and things.
With sensitive instincts, she was the creative one.
and the ignorant & clumsy diction in
Trapped by no track of hours we hanged suspended.
--- Joe Fineman joe_f@verizon.net
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