The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #79813   Message #1449627
Posted By: Little Hawk
01-Apr-05 - 07:54 PM
Thread Name: BS: Obit: Little Hawk (April 1, 2096)
Subject: RE: BS: Obit: Little Hawk (April 1, 2096)
Nice try, man, but what I think you really need to do is compose a more lengthy explanation. Have you looked through a copy of "Moby Dick" or read a chapter of "War and Peace"? No? I thought not.

What I am recommending is that you study those books carefully, noting how they are organized, then compose an essay of no less than 3,000 carefully chosen words to explain exactly why you did what you did and why it's okay.

In this way you will be able to clear the slate, so to speak.

If I were you, I'd set aside a nice big chunk of time and do it up RIGHT. :-)