Wow!! It's a powerful song, Simons. Aside from some minor typos, I don't see that there's any need to comment on my part. Someone who went through Vietnam in those days might be better able to render an opinion.

Do you have a tune in mind for this song? Too bad you didn't put the title in the Subject instead of "My Lyrics". I'm sure "Take Me From the Battlefield" would have piqued others to view and comment.

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