I agree it is a powerful song. Please submit a melody to MMario or Pene Azul. I am most impressed how you individualize Johnny's experience, which make the tragedy more real. The Legacy of cigarettes, flares, (every vet I've spoken with hates fireworks) and the flag are vivid images. My only criticism is the chorus. I am not a fan of choruses as they only encourage drunks to sing along. The verses stand very well by themselves.

Brian