The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #67948 Message #1481322
Posted By: beardedbruce
10-May-05 - 12:52 AM
Thread Name: BS: In every thread someone has to be last!
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last!
42,
"Leaping from beneath the sheets left tangled"
should be a good start to a sonnet... You might want to work on it....problem is, a good rhyme would be 'dangled', and I am not sure THAT is where you would want this to go!
Leaping from beneath the sheets left tangled
By night's passions, I run away, to work.
Should we discuss what it was that dangled...