The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #67948   Message #1481325
Posted By: beardedbruce
10-May-05 - 12:58 AM
Thread Name: BS: In every thread someone has to be last!
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last!
of course, if you want the Italian rhyme scheme, (abbaabba) you could use tangled/mangled/strangled/dangled ( in any order...) Perhaps ( in the example above , the b rhymes couls be work/shirk/lurk/perk ....


Leaping from beneath the sheets left tangled
By night's passions, I run away, to work.
.........perk
Should we discuss what it was that dangled...
.........mangled
.........shirk
.........lurk
.........strangled.


etc. You might want a different order.

8-{E