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Thread #81774   Message #1499682
Posted By: George Papavgeris
03-Jun-05 - 06:45 PM
Thread Name: BS: Tainted love
Subject: BS: Tainted love
The constant bickering about this and that in politics around the globe has led me to write something. It's just a poem for now, though I expect that by tomorrow it may well have a tune to it.

It is not meant to depict the situation in any one country - I have seen equivalent signs in every country I have lived (three) and most countries I visited (18). But I expect people will see themselves in it and want to argue, so to save time I moved it to BS section from the start.

Please criticise/judge.

TAINTED LOVE

I am a patriot, said the traitor
I love my country and won't hear a word against it
It is the best and we all know that God has blessed it
If you think different, you're enemy of mine.

I am a patriot, said the patriot
I love my country just like you and I can prove it:
But it has faults, and all I want is to improve it.
And I'll put life and reputation on the line.

You are a traitor, said the traitor
You're finding faults where there are none, like a magician
To all my country means to me, you're opposition
You rock the boat and you think you know best.

I am a patriot, said the patriot
Love that can see no fault is love only in letter
I see them, but I care enough to make them better
And all my life and actions this fact will attest.

You are a traitor, said the traitor
A liar too, because my love you just offended
It is high time that your subversive acts were ended
So from this moment pal, you are under arrest.

George Papavgeris, June 2005