The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #67948   Message #1538897
Posted By: beardedbruce
09-Aug-05 - 07:49 PM
Thread Name: BS: In every thread someone has to be last!
Subject: RE: BS: In every thread someone has to be last!
Sorry, Nevertheless...

You have failed to consistantly meet the structure or rhyme... Either accept that structure, or not- the partial , irregular construction is not a poem.

A
B
A
B

The A lines are quadreameter, the B lines are trimeter. ( iambic, if you care...)

Now, care to try again?