The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #83915 Message #1569474
Posted By: MMario
23-Sep-05 - 04:25 PM
Thread Name: The Wiser Maid (please critique!)
Subject: RE: THE WISER MAID (please critique!)
looking at this better late then never I see
"But I am not at liberty to walk with any man
Until my true-love John returns from his ship's command"
and immediatley think:
"But I am not at liberty to walk with any man
Until my true-love Johnny returns once more to land"
but that's neither here nor there...
Can you post the completed version?