The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #86553   Message #1612063
Posted By: JudyB
23-Nov-05 - 01:15 PM
Thread Name: BS: Proofreading Help Needed ASAP
Subject: RE: BS: Proofreading Help Needed ASAP
'JANKERS' (The Third Day)

Nothing that TheBigPinkLad didn't already find

WHERE ARE POLICEMEN WHEN YOU NEED ONE?

Only thing to add is that paragraph 12 just contains a slash and no text - TheBigPinkLad is good!

JudyB