The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #86553   Message #1613715
Posted By: TheBigPinkLad
25-Nov-05 - 02:19 PM
Thread Name: BS: Proofreading Help Needed ASAP
Subject: RE: BS: Proofreading Help Needed ASAP
SATURDAY RIDE 5


27. There was no longer any trembling in my hands as I fastened the strap of my helmet, and I scarcely noticed that my friends had started toward the Headquarter Company offices to take up positions to view the coming attraction.

28. AT either end of the branches of the T were further glass double-swinging doors, with six or seven steps down to return one to street level.

29. Offices were on either side of the corridors, with the highest raking officers' suites closest to the front door.

30. Putting my motorcycle into gear, I slowly circled ? the building for a brief reconnoiter.