The corrections on these are done-- I'm taking them in the order in which I posted them:
2. THE BOAT
5. BLITZ!
4. THE WAR BEGINS
3. NEW BOOTS
7. COUNTRY SCHOOL
8. SCRUMPIN'
11. DAY TWO

I've modified paragraph breaks on those as well as doing your fixes and smoothing out usage inconsistencies. They'll get one more look when I print all of it out, so if anyone spots any glaring boo-boos in those I CAN still use the help, but I will have a hard time finding them by para number so please include the complete sentence you want me to look at and I'll find it by Word "Find."

All the helps in bold, BTW, have been wonderfully easy to work with. As I work, I'm laughing a lot at how some of the phrases must have read to you! I caught one or two funny ones myself-- "in a few minuets" for example! :~)

Thanks again. Harcopies avail by snail ONLY to proofers above, for a Mudcat donation of your choosing (cash or auction item). (PM details.)

~Susan