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Thread #87228   Message #1627575
Posted By: Celtaddict
14-Dec-05 - 07:41 PM
Thread Name: Lyr/Tune Add: 'Irish Proverb' song by CapriUni
Subject: RE: 'Irish Proverb' song by CapriUni
And the ANtics of MANy a KING?
The accent on OF doesn't sound comfortable, and you could make 'king' rhyme 'wing' without the 's.'
I agree with open mike about the third verse too.