I'm with Peace on that last line in that stocking song of alanabit's there being a good un.

Good lines often turn up in songs that don't work too well, as Jerry said back there. I've always regarded any song I've written as being available for recycling by me. Even when it's a song I like well enough.

It doesn't matter too uich wahta a song looks like wrutten down - but I think you have to be able to imagine saying it rather than singing it.