The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #89780 Message #1697441
Posted By: Azizi
19-Mar-06 - 01:23 AM
Thread Name: BS: Being Canuck on St. Joseph's Day
Subject: RE: BS: Being Canuck on St. Joseph's Day
Peace, just for the record, I got the reference about the barbecue sauce before I read your last post...Meaning I didn't know you had posted that explanation until I submitted my last post.
So I don't want you to take away the props I've given myself for finally understanding what St. Huberts meant....
And with regard to your "rap song", I'd say that the first 3 lines "work" but "that makes one roll one's eyes"...
IMNSHO, ya gotta nix that line big time..
First off-how many rappers you know say "makes one" do anything?
Not to mention that using "one" two times in a sentence is one time too many.
Also not to mention that "rolling eyes" is kinda not pc correct if ya get my drift.
So..you asked. I answered.
You can look at it this way-3 out of 4 lines ain't bad...but maybe rap music just isn't your forte.