"Racist shit" that's helpful. Don't mind some of the jerks. The point you want to make it up to you. The song itself wasn't to bad a jop in my opinion, so it didn't scan that well, 1st try, again not to bad. First drafts usually suck if you haven't been at it for a while. Bring it back to the drawing board, sometimes you gotta bring it back X number of times before it takes on it's real shpe then you go back & smooth it out. And sometimes if your reall lucky it's almost done on the 1st go round, practically written it's self. Kepp at it, it's a pretty good job for a start.
Barry