I gotta sympathize with Chongo on this one, pal. Yer drivin' a lot of apes to drink with this sappy sonnet stuff of yours. Consider gettin' a job in a grocery store or somethin' instead, that's my advice.

Maybe try platform shoes. Or a decent haircut.

There has gotta be a human female out there that's dumb enough to fall for this line of yours, but you might get to old fer it to do ya any good before you find her. That's my take on it.

- Jersey Joe