The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #59418   Message #1844683
Posted By: Rapparee
27-Sep-06 - 09:28 PM
Thread Name: BS: The Mother of all BS threads
Subject: RE: BS: The Mother of all BS threads
I've been writing a song, but I'm sort of stuck. Perhaps someone can suggest something. Here's what I have so far:

It's a lesson too late for the learnin'
Made of wood, made of wood,
In the blink of an eye my soul is turnin'
To the 'hood, to the 'hood.


Something's just not quite right about it -- it doesn't quite express what I want to say.