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Thread #95825   Message #1869246
Posted By: Stilly River Sage
26-Oct-06 - 01:24 PM
Thread Name: BS: fishermen prevail. how the hell?
Subject: RE: BS: fishermen prevail. how the hell?
Wherever it was from, it's piss-poor writing. Choppy quotes, information smattered erratically, no topic sentences for paragraphs because there are mostly single sentences, no paragraphs to speak of. This is a classic example of what I hate about stories on the Internet (though this was no doubt published in print in the same sloppy fashion--this writer has a lot to learn). There are six places in the article where two sentences appear in sequence, but never more than two.

Makes it damned hard to make sense of an article written in this way.

SRS