The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #96044 Message #1874288
Posted By: Jim Dixon
01-Nov-06 - 07:36 PM
Thread Name: Lyr Add: Longfellow's 'Sermon of St. Francis'
Subject: RE: Lyr Add: Longfellow's 'Sermon of St. Francis'
I don't see anything wrong with the original.
Is it the emphasis on the word "through" that bothers you?