The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #98215 Message #1942433
Posted By: *daylia*
20-Jan-07 - 09:35 AM
Thread Name: The Healer - Criticism please
Subject: RE: The Healer - Criticism please
I like it, Fred. I don't find it pretentious at all - but maybe you could make it a bit less gendered? "Shes" can be great healers too ....