The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #98215   Message #1942437
Posted By: oldhippie
20-Jan-07 - 09:47 AM
Thread Name: The Healer - Criticism please
Subject: RE: The Healer - Criticism please
Once you record it, I'll need a copy for airplay!

I find it very powerful, however I agree with the gender comment. Perhaps the middle verse could be written as "she" - thus the song would reflect the possibility of there being more than one healer. Then you would have to consider whether to make the last verse "they" to reflect both the male and female healers, or leave it as "he".