I like the gender resolution georgiansilver posted.

You probably didn't mean it to be like this, and I do NOT mean it as a criticism because I like some "rap" but in my mind I *heard* it spoken out like rap. Maybe it's the cadences. I found myself hurrying on with a certain rhythm the words brought out. I probably need to hear it with a tune.:-)

He looks straight through you and lays your soul all bare "all" feels unnecessary to me.

Thanks for sharing,

kat