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Thread #98215 Message #1942626
Posted By: GUEST,member Fred
20-Jan-07 - 02:05 PM
Thread Name: The Healer - Criticism please
Subject: RE: The Healer - Criticism please
You know, I had hardly posted it, when I realised someone would comment on it being all male. I don't particularly think of healers as being male, neither do I think of mankind as being male. If I were personifying mankind, I would probably take the word "he" rather than "it". For something mechanical I'd use "she"... It is not a conscious thing. I think maybe I will go for verse one as "he", verse two as "she" and verse three as "they". It would give the song a bit of dramatic development too. Thanks for all your interest and comments so far.