The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #98215   Message #1942868
Posted By: mg
20-Jan-07 - 07:04 PM
Thread Name: The Healer - Criticism please
Subject: RE: The Healer - Criticism please
I liked it and I liked the idea that the healer was male when the perception might be that more females would be so I would leave it as male. That is the way you wrote it and it came to you and of course I hate changing stuff once it is written.

Snake oil...has been found to have truly healing properties so I wouldn't put that in though...said to be used by Chinese laborers for all their pains while building railroads etc. mg