Mudcat Café message #1966747

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Thread #15756 Message #1966747
Posted By: EBarnacle
13-Feb-07 - 08:13 PM
Thread Name: Origins: Fathom the Bowl
Subject: RE: Lyr Add: Fathom the Bowl - minor changes

Well how about: Her heart's black as a coal?
It meets most of the needs and explicates the author's intent.