The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #99198 Message #1976117
Posted By: Dave Wynn
22-Feb-07 - 12:38 PM
Thread Name: Let's write a song together!
Subject: RE: Let's write a song together!
I wouldn't say flawed Jim Lad, in three days you have a song that just needs a tune and possibly a refrain. At the risk of getting cut up I would suggest that Swallow is substituted for Sparrow and walking on broken glass I would re-arrange the first line of the last verse to read "So now I'll say goodbye ,my love" (dunno why)
I like the idea of Highway of Tears, I will look on the net as you recommend.