The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #99198 Message #1976157
Posted By: ClaireBear
22-Feb-07 - 01:27 PM
Thread Name: Let's write a song together!
Subject: RE: Let's write a song together!
I like Spot the Dog's line better -- and anyway I didn't write the former line; I found it in a prior JimLad post.
But it's nice of you to defer to me. I have a suggestion for the following few words, come to think of it:
So now I'll say goodbye my love
But as you slip away
Please know my heart is aching
Just to make it through the day
And though now we may be parted
Still I pray that in the end
When I've reached my last tomorrow
We'll share yesterday again