The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #20188   Message #210198
Posted By: Uncle_DaveO
11-Apr-00 - 03:31 PM
Thread Name: Songwriting -- Part 2
Subject: RE: Songwriting -- Part 2
Amos, I'll agree that it's too short, and could use a couple more verses. But it's a one-joke song, and after I've "snapped the trap" I don't know where I could go.

Dave Oesterreich