The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #20188   Message #210828
Posted By: Bert
12-Apr-00 - 05:49 PM
Thread Name: Songwriting -- Part 2
Subject: RE: Songwriting -- Part 2
Good song Dave,

You could try inserting a couple of verses, before the last verse, of specific instances where she chases a man and he gets away. Maybe chronologically, High School then College?