The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #60096   Message #2132118
Posted By: Amos
23-Aug-07 - 01:46 PM
Thread Name: Mudcat Bad Writing Contest (Enter Often)
Subject: RE: Mudcat Bad Writing Contest (Enter Often)
Evening fell across the dark lagoon like Spaw-gas filling a crowded bus. The moon, gentle as a limp member, rose slowly over the horizon. Metilde quietly slipped out of her bikini, and slipped into the warm, placid waters, which welcomed her, absorbed her like a good sewer absorbs a flush -- uncomplaining, quiescent, flowing quietly.

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