The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #60096   Message #2132146
Posted By: katlaughing
23-Aug-07 - 02:20 PM
Thread Name: Mudcat Bad Writing Contest (Enter Often)
Subject: RE: Mudcat Bad Writing Contest (Enter Often)
Oh, Amos, that was truly awrfull!

Okay then:

Turning her head, slightly, not all the way to the left, but just a bit off-centre, Mindy could see out of the window as she lay on the hospital bed. She wasn't sure how she got there, something about going down a drain kept flitting across the movie screen in her head, but if she tried too hard to remember it made her head hurt, so she looked out the window and tried not to remember.