The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #6370   Message #2237802
Posted By: Little Hawk
16-Jan-08 - 01:25 PM
Thread Name: Lyr ADD: Pancho and Lefty (Townes Van Zandt)
Subject: RE: The Ballad of Pancho and Lefty
Your lyrics teeter drunkenly from flashes of momentary brilliance to blithering absentee idiocy, Amos, rather as a drunken budgerigar teeters back and forth from one foot to the other on his precarious perch just prior to taking a fluttering nosedive into the nearby trash basket or the toilet bowl...

May I pull the handle of the latter now and end your misery?