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Thread #55013   Message #2279549
Posted By: GUEST,Gillian Gardner
04-Mar-08 - 03:44 PM
Thread Name: Lyr Req: Raglan Road, is it 'pledge' or 'play' ?
Subject: RE: Lyr Req: Raglan Road, is it 'pledge' or 'play' ?
Obviously many people are tormented by trying to fit the lyric and the tune. I did find a solution that flows very nicely and doesn't alter the meaning of the lines with the two words "known". Try this -it is easy to phrase...

I gave her gifts of the mind; I gave her the secret sign
Of artists who have known the true gods of sound and stone ...

So simple and eliminates the word congestion.