Hi, jstar. I transferred this into your older thread. You can click on your name in the 'From' space in any post of yours to get a list of your posts.

As to the song, it might work in country music. I can imagine the video: stark black and white, early morning hours, the scene mainly lit by the flashing lights illuminating the bits of chrome and glass strewn over the road and maybe a couple of chalk outlines. Of course, that hints at a traffic accident and leaves the gun completely out of the picture, but that might be a whole different story line. I hear the song and want to know what happened and if any of the police cars had a vid cam.

Of course, I say 'country' because bad decisions can make popular music. Take,

"That I dug my key into the side of his
Pretty little souped up four wheel drive
Carved my name into his leather seat
I took a Louisville slugger to both head lights
Slashed a hole in all four tires
Maybe next time he'll think before he cheats"

for example