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Thread #110004   Message #2303390
Posted By: peregrina
01-Apr-08 - 12:40 PM
Thread Name: I need a lyric cleaned up - suggestions?
Subject: RE: I need a lyric cleaned up - suggestions?
The verse works with a lot of repetitions-different kinds of picking, also the wedding-ring/wedding in the spring. So keeping 'picking' in there whatever you precede it with seems apt. But farmhands has (to me) a really evocative effect because of getting a farm in there along with the spring and peaches.

Children,black and white did pick cotton...Didn't Johnny Cash have to pick cotton as a kid?