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Thread #111060   Message #2336499
Posted By: GUEST,Suffolk Miracle
09-May-08 - 09:38 AM
Thread Name: She moved through the fair - repeats?
Subject: RE: She moved through the fair - repeats?
The question is why do you repeat it?
A)You think it works that way
B) You don't like a song to be that short.

I can't argue with A). But if it's a case of B) consider that if a song is well sung, short can be good. And failing that, this song in particular has lots more verses:
I once loved a young girl...
It's deeply I loved her...
According to promise...
Farewell to you Molly...
...to mention just the ones I know. Any of these might be considered as an alternative to repetition.