Looking good! I'd drop the intro - good information, but with YouTube you need to catch people fast! If you can bring the volume up overall, that would be good - I had every setting I have at max, and still could barely hear you. (Note to self - I think this is the only time in the years that I've known him that it's ever occurred to me to ask Barry to be louder....) :) I like the closeup view from the middle of the song better than the wider shot at the beginning - if there is closeup video for the first verse, you might consider using that - again to catch the audience. It's hard to relate to you folks when you're "way back there" and easier when we can see you sweat! :)
We both know that yours will always be my second favorite version of that song (Hi Charley!) - and I think the video has great potential - and can show how engaging you folks can be (which is why closer is better!).
Looking forward to seeing what else was on the tape!