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Thread #112880   Message #2412390
Posted By: Azizi
13-Aug-08 - 07:59 AM
Thread Name: Bruce Murdoch CD-Matters of the Heart
Subject: RE: Bruce Murdoch CD-Matters of the Heart
Corrections

I made several errors in my last post. I'm sorry about that. I can't proofread my own writing worth a dime-though I really did read it over...

Here's some major errors that I caught:

Bruce Murdoch songs are wonderfully crafted poetic compositions that once heard, compel you to hear them again, and again.

-snip-

[From "She Reminds Me of You"]
She has her head in the air
Standing so proud
All I can say is good golly Miss Molly out loud
Picture so fine
Vision so true
Every time I see her walk by, she reminds me of you

-snip-

From "First Robin of Springtime"]
On bended knees I begged her pardon
I felt the rivers cease to flow
She chose my hands to lay her heart on
Electricity that you can't let go
Oh, nooooooooo