The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #59418 Message #2419134
Posted By: Rapparee
20-Aug-08 - 09:53 PM
Thread Name: BS: The Mother of all BS threads
Subject: RE: BS: The Mother of all BS threads
Unlike Amos (obviously a greedhead neocon Republican who will undoubtedly vote for McCain at least five or six times) Jeri does catch-and-release.
Not a bad epic poem. The scansion limps here and there, the meter's a bit rough, the imagery leaves something to be desired, there are several "iffy" rhymes, and the whole thing would probably have been better as an Alexandrine. But a good try nonetheless.