There is beauty second only to Eden
in your warm breast, maiden
gentle, loving, in gaiety, (not sure about 'liwus lawen'; ll think further)
gentle star, hear the unwell one (i.e. lovesick).

Tonight promise me your love,
We'll set the terms before we depart
to bind ourselves to each other, whatever may come:
Believe in me, and say you will come.

In your eyes I will find the truth
starshining with grace and virtue,
Seeing you is to me ecstasy,
gentle star, hear the lovesick one.


... more or less.

And - no name Guest? Generally I won't respond to nameless ones. But ... you did leave an 'x' so we'll forgive you this time.

sian