George, I agree with all the other commentors. I think that you have a great song here.

I don't know what Greek music sounds like, but if some of it sounds like Erotokritos, than I've got to listen to more Greek music. But I agree with Suegorgeous that the tune sounds like what I think medieval English tunes sound like.

Fwiw, I had to use more sharp listening skills than I usually do because of your accent, but I like accents so that was cool.

If that's the rough version, the actual version is going to be a winner!