Hi everyone,
I'm a young songwriter/musician and I was wondering if someone could give me some feedback/critiquing on these songs.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oGQ8Sul2xis
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=acTlUsHjARM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7y3INC7wwIQ

Any pointers and thoughts would be great, thanks!