The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #120873 Message #2633067
Posted By: GUEST,boxbox
16-May-09 - 01:20 AM
Thread Name: Lyr Req: They Don't Write Them Like That Anymore
Subject: RE: Lyr Req: dads drunk again vin garbut
Quote:
...A bold audience is watchin' while Tony is botchin' (?)
And missin' an easy card trick (?)...
Emma B, I would suggest:
...A bored audience is watching while Tony is botching and messing up easy card tricks....
The way "piano" is rhymed with "sledgehammer" is one of my all time favorites; certainly doesn't appear in my Rhyming Dictionary!
MC