Thanks folks, I was just reviewing it on the head phones and i thought I rushed a bit also, my phrasing also maybe a little work. I have this central Pennsylvania accent that creeps into everything I sing LOL ... true .. I want to try and get it the best that I can. I have a concert with a bunch of talented folks performing a lot of old songs. It is a fund raiser for sick kids. They asked me to do some songs I wrote and whatever else I wanted ... I like this one if I tighten it down just a bit. I really wanted to run it by you folks first to see if it will work. I appreciate everyones time for sure.