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Thread #124089   Message #2738434
Posted By: maeve
04-Oct-09 - 08:45 PM
Thread Name: Olddude song - what have I done right
Subject: RE: Olddude song - what have I done right
Dan- You sure write lovely songs! Your guitar sounds so pretty, and I love the rhythm. It's a contemplative melody, yet is hopeful, moving forward.

I listened intently to the evocative lyrics and felt the need for a resolution of the question that matches the tune. I feel the despair of the words and want them to move a little further toward meeting the perceived hope of the tune. Even when you write from depression you make me want to hear more- pretty slick, I'd say. :)

Thanks for posting this. It was great to be able to listen to it. If you ever do need a real list of what you've done right here, drop me a line. I can fill a full page for you!

maeve