The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #124358 Message #2746456
Posted By: Charley Noble
15-Oct-09 - 08:42 AM
Thread Name: Lyr Add: The War in Afghanistan - a New Song
Subject: RE: Lyr Add: The War in Afghanistan - a New Song
Jake-
It's a difficult subject to deal with but keep working on it.
Maybe the song would have more power if it were in the first person, as if sung by a loved one or one of his mates.